As I've previously mentioned, trying to compete with significant problems in your swing is never a good idea. Your local Foremost Golf Professional is always there to help so please go and visit them for any help.
In the meantime, here's a drill that might help. Lay two headcovers down either side of your ball, creating a pathway through impact. If you are struggling with an exaggerated in-to-out swing path you will struggle to strike the ball without clipping the headcovers. Having a clear path through which to swing is a great way to visualise what the ideal route into the ball should be.
This drill may well help you find a more neutral swing path.